Daily Blog 84

 We were told to revised our essay we have written in Essay Writing class. There's a lot of classmates that have been told to fix on certain things in their writing like their topic, the introduction, body paragraphs and etc. It took so much time and none of us finished it yet. 

On the second class, there's couple of presentations that's delivered by some of the classmates. I honestly not fully understand their material because of the rush and limited time, I hope I'll understand it better after watching couple of explanation videos.